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Open Poetry #43
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2islander2
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by the sea
0 posted 2008-10-26 04:46 AM


A fast jay
in the ruffled sky,
missed appointment
with summer.
© Copyright 2008 yann rolland - All Rights Reserved
tsu
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u.k.
1 posted 2008-10-26 09:41 AM

its amazing to me how much you made me think with less than 12 words!
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
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Realm of Supernatural
2 posted 2008-10-26 10:45 AM

He needs a Jay-alarm! **giggles**
~Enjoyed the Write!


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2islander2
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by the sea
3 posted 2008-10-27 01:06 PM

thank you Tsu for your kind comment.

yann
2islander2
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by the sea
4 posted 2008-10-27 01:07 PM

Thank You Aw

yann
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