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| Open Poetry #43 |
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hand of love |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
a soft hand like a tender embrace a curl, a touch, a slow caress bespeaks of love's adorning place where less is more as more is less a hand of joy when it was young that wore a ring to sign of love to hold her tight when they were strong guarding blessings sent from above as time wore on so did that hand but spots of age could not erase strengths of a long lost holy band a life of shares and pleasant days when touching was as good as holding and holding spoke of loving where loving lent way to caring sharing life within their lives |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"where less is more as more is less" I adore this portrait of unconditional love. Falling in love, getting married, the blessings of children, memories, and through all of their lives ... still ... the love lasts and lasts ... definitely something to look forward to. Sentimentally romantic write. Enjoyed! Janette always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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tsu Junior Member
since 2008-10-20
Posts 29u.k. |
this is so beautifully written - the words just wrap around the reader with gentleness in this write about lasting love. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Thoughts of Mother |
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Dark Star Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392Lost in your eyes |
love is eternity |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Janette, thank you for your generous and kind comments...pleased you liked it tsu, such kind words...thank you for reading and commenting...I appreciate it TD, while I never would have thought that, I'm glad it reminded you of someone that nice Dark Star, not only is true love eternal, it makes the time worth living...thanks for reading and taking your time to leave a comment |
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