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the bell jar |
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TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569
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She stepped upon the windowpane and gently spread her wings again A leap of faith and off she flew leaving all that she once knew Should have done this years ago valleys curve and run down low Mountains etched upon the sky she always did know how to fly She let her soul out of the jar spirits carried her afar Orange tipped and powdered wing sensitive to everything |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Beautiful, beautiful. Like a butterfly, I'm guessing? Anyway. lovely poem. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
This poem has such a lovely feel of freedom, Tina. Love it! Ida |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Great metaphor  |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I think we've all stepped on that window pane, once or more in our lives, my friend... but love the way you chose to describe it. j. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
So beautiful! Love, Margherita |
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Gaelynsgirl Member
since 2008-07-18
Posts 175Ont. Canada |
A wonderful flight of fancy! One of nature's grand metaphors for possibility and courage! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tina~ Ah, to set oneself free ... what a way to soar~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Sounds like what I've just done but I ain't no butterfly! Lovely poem! Helen |
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TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569 |
Thanks all |
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