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Robert E. Jordan
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0 posted 2008-10-24 05:52 PM


Bones doesn‘t have a tooth brush.  
No one ever gave him one,
his teeth are rotten.  

Bones loves Halloween trick or treat.  
Bones loves his candy,
even if it makes his teeth hurt.  

Bobby

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Marchmadness
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1 posted 2008-10-25 12:27 PM


I absolutely loved halloween as a child. It was different than it is now.
                                Ida

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 2008-10-25 03:46 AM


I'm pleased Bones enjoyed his candy Bobby... I still have a very sweet tooth even at my age!   love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Robert E. Jordan
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3 posted 2008-10-25 09:43 AM


Thanks dear Ida,

You are right.  The kids now are much tamer than we were.  Some of the things I used to do at night for the whole two weeks before Halloween I'd be arrested for today for sure.  We were bad.

Of course back then, no-body had anything, so the adults weren't so protective of their property.

Love Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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4 posted 2008-10-25 09:45 AM


Thanks dear RDB,

Bones and I had our last tooth pulled when we were 35.  Now I can eat candy galore with no problem.

Love Bobby

steavenr
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5 posted 2008-10-25 10:44 AM


unexpected turn from the start in this one, but you've tied it in well...can relate to sugar windfall well (and have the fillings to prove it)
Robert E. Jordan
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6 posted 2008-10-25 11:43 AM


Thanks Steavenr,

I'm glad you could relate to the poem.

Candy is good.

Bobby

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