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Huan Yi
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Waukegan

0 posted 2008-10-24 02:24 PM


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In a forest
In Waukegan

On a bridge
Made of iron

I watch the trees
With my father’s eyes


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XOx Uriah xOX
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Virginia
1 posted 2008-10-24 02:46 PM


::nods::    ::smiles::
steavenr
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2 posted 2008-10-24 03:17 PM


you have just described the full extent of my experience in hunting squirrels...enjoyed (not the squirrel hunting--the write)

The only squirrels I ever saw were the ones my buddies already shot...and I got up at 4 AM for that?

2islander2
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by the sea
3 posted 2008-10-24 04:34 PM


You say such deep emotions...This poem fits perfectly to the greatness of a memory...A pleasure to read.

yann  

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