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| Open Poetry #43 |
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Look At Me. |
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Newpoet Member
since 2008-05-16
Posts 72 |
Look at me. I am bones and molecules and cells. I am strands of fibers and blood. My muscles twitch and tear. My heart drums to its own beat. My cranium is painfully expanding. My fingers simultaneously type. My nerves are unpredictable. My emotions are uncontrollable. My spine twists and turns. Look at me. I am the forgotten past. I am the moment, the present. I become the future. Look at me. I am the collection of select entities. I am the memory of my former self. I am the creator and the product. Look at me. I am disgust's child. I am ignored happiness. I am almost wise. I am not. Look at me. I am religion in a grasp. I am Alpha and Omega. I am life and death. Look at me. I am Satan. I am not. I am Buddha. I am not. I am everything. I am nothing. Look at me. I am biased thoughts. I am egoism. I am many mistakes. Look at me. I am alternate realities. I am reality. I am my own false reality. Look at me. I am change. I am knowledge. I am rebirth. Look. At. Me. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Wow. I could hardly get through this one, for images forming, and questions asking themselves. I kept trying to run away and think on it, and had to push myself to keep going. You've got a lot in there, and I'm going to reread it now, and enjoy it even more. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I'm looking! I'm looking! ~ and there is one heckuvvalot to look at! lol Gosh, you've got a bit of everything going on! ~ From the alpha to the omega! To quote a line from "African Queen" ~ "Here's LOOKIN' at you, kid!" lol  EA |
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tabme Junior Member
since 2008-10-03
Posts 37Mississippi |
I liked it except for the look at me parts. |
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