The Ghost Of Hudson Hall ..(HAPPY HALLOWEEN)

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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2008-10-21 07:33 PM

At the stroke of midnight,
you will find her there,
walking up the flight of stairs,

It was Halloween night,
October thrity first 1903,
Hudson Hall costume party,

Everyone in town was going,
she had been invited,
by the most popular guy,

Jameson Collingsworth the third,
no one really liked him,
he just had alot of money,

She had never been on a date,
let alone a Halloween Party,
she was still excited to attend,

She had just turned eighteen,
saved up money for the dress,
doing odd jobs here and there,

At seven he arrived,
with flowers in hand,
and a smile on his face,

She was falling for him,
after all, she had never,
been treated like this,

The party was in full swing,
couples laughing, drinking,
not the crowd she was use to,

After a few dances and drinks,
Jameson asked her to come upstairs,
he wanted her to see something,

She hesitated at first,
then agreed to meet him there,
when it was midnight,

time passed quickly,
the clock was ringing,
it was twelve,

She hurried up the stairs,
awaiting something special,
when she arrived,

She found Jameson kissing someone else,
all of Jamesons friends laughed,
she was heartbroken and crying,

She ran out of the bedroom,
as she was running,
her heel got caught,

down the steps she flew,
at the bottom she lay,
with her neck broken intwo,

Every Halloween, you can see her,
when the clock strikes twelve,
going up the stairs,

Looking for something,
that she never had,
never got, and never will,

She is the ghost of Hudson Hall!
and she climbs the stairs,
still....

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

1 posted 2008-10-21 08:52 PM

Romantic Heart that is a well constructed poem my dear, sad but well written, thanks for sharing.

Lindsay

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2008-10-21 09:57 PM

A Romantic Heart - great write, love the graphics...

BC

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

3 posted 2008-10-22 09:00 AM

Yo dear A Romantic Heart,

That's a very sad Halloween story. You told it very well. The tombstone is clever.

Love Bobby

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

4 posted 2008-10-22 02:35 PM

Wow...great write!

Eric

Chosen One II
New Member

since 2008-10-23

Posts 7

5 posted 2008-10-25 10:56 AM

this si creepy romantic heart

chosen

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

6 posted 2008-10-25 11:45 AM

Good Halloween story, ARH.
iDA

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

7 posted 2008-10-25 09:13 PM

ouuu! That picture was scary with that moving ghost! I never knew that was going to come out for ya~ BOO!!!

Good halloweeny write dearest poetess!

The count down to Halloween is here!~ soon!!! hehehe **giggle giggle** I am so EXCITED

Write Some More! I can't wait

to you dear Friend

ARCTIC WIND

TRACE2RYM
Junior Member

since 2008-10-09

Posts 38

8 posted 2008-10-30 10:12 PM

What a rouge, They roam among us. Look around corners before you walk in the dark.

Janette

Member Elite

since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

9 posted 2008-10-30 11:26 PM

Nice and Halloween creepy.

frightfully good stuff

Janette

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

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