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Cinnamon Squares |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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Without notification, they fall the sky the choreographer and the caligraphy is stark against its whitefaced walls much like us kickin em up without orchestration or benefit of concert halls just in love with the leaves intoxication by inhalation bronze and berry mauve and cherry and colors not yet claimed or named, endless streams and pennies are pitched on a faithful man's dreams it's morning magentas on cinnamon squares we are born again children shedding our fears. [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (10-22-2008 07:20 AM).] |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Always did love your cookin ms inky |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"and pennies are pitched on a faithful man's dreams" neat line, but I must confess...was really looking for cinnabuns...nice fall descriptions |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Delicious, inkedgoddess. Ida |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Tell me this is not about cooking, but the annual falling of the leaves. I absolutely loved it, right up to the last leaf standing. ""and colors not yet claimed or named,"" great line. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: You are one FINE poetess, dear Michele. Love, Margherita |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I would highlight the same line Margherita did, for I've always seen in-between colors/hues that didn't fit the usual color nomenclature. Enjoyed. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
inkedgoddess - lovely, just lovely, always did like your writings... BC |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
beautiful |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Now this is very very good. Would like to add it to my Word File of poems by others. If yes, what name shall I attach to it? I don't give gifts . . . This is very good. John . |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"and pennies are pitched on a faithful man's dreams" Luscious. I enjoyed the taste of this one, it goes so well with this breezy fall day. Janette always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed the Write Ink!  ARCTIC WIND |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks guys and dolls for leafing along with me |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
"we are born again children shedding our fears" I loved it all, but the end went straight to my heart The only time we waste is the time we spend thinking we are alone. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks again for stopping by |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"and colors not yet claimed or named, endless streams" not yet claimed or named... much like emotion and sometimes people. Loved this.  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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