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Musel
Junior Member

since 2008-07-17

Posts 34

0 posted 2008-07-18 04:03 AM

Absence makes the heart grow fonder for the person that you miss
Your thoughts go back repeatedly to the warmth of that first kiss.
You search in vain for a memory that makes you feel alright,
But thoughts alone, they disappear, and day turns back to night.

My memories of you and me are filled with good vibrations
They linger on inside my head and give me sweet sensations
Like the thought of you in that red dress, the contour of your hips,
Your smile that lights a darkened room and the softness of your lips.

They are each to me like a calming sea, a warmth that fills my brain,
They seem to be like a melody that soothes a lovelorn pain.
A pain it is for far away is where she is from me,
And far away she will remain for the future I can’t see.

For if I could I’m sure of this, she’d be right by my side,
And in that way I could declare, a love I now must hide.
So this is more a note to me, than her for she’s not here
For if she was I could requite, how much I hold her dear...

aZMERE bOHEMIAN nOMAD
Junior Member

since 2008-07-07

Posts 20
I live in the uk but dreaming of a place across the channel

1 posted 2008-07-18 07:08 PM

"Never give up hope" .

Beautifully expressed

Every step we take,becomes a path well travelled

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

2 posted 2008-07-18 07:13 PM

Yo Musel,

This works very well. It has good rhythm, and also good end rhymes.

Bobby

Prasad Nataraj
Senior Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

3 posted 2008-07-19 04:43 AM

Hi Musel, if her love was true, she will feel your cry too. Nice write. Prasad

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2008-07-19 07:13 AM

Welcome to Pip, I love your reflections. Thoughts are energy, so the object of your thoughts will perceive your waves of longing.

Love,
Margherita

Musel
Junior Member

since 2008-07-17

Posts 34

5 posted 2008-07-19 07:23 AM

thank you for your kind comments, they are much appreciated

Colm

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

6 posted 2008-07-19 08:34 AM

Love and longing so beautifully expressed

Hope

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

7 posted 2008-07-19 03:11 PM

Welcome to Pip!

ARCTIC WIND

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

8 posted 2008-07-19 04:02 PM

Dream it! Think it! Believe it! ~ and manifest her return to you into reality!

She must be very special to have inspired such adoration!

Love-ly writing!

Giving you a warm, welcoming pip hug-o-love,

Earth Angel

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

9 posted 2008-07-20 07:25 AM

I'm with Earth Angel.. (Lindalou!) ... she has so much wisdom on me... your words are very beautiful... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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