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Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2008-10-21 03:57 AM

.

I want
To be
With you
For awhile

Something
Has given me
Another wound
And I need
Some time
To rest

Let me be
Without use of words
Feel your hand
Upon my head
As it lays
Upon your breast

To spend this night
Absent stars or moon—
Listening to my heart

.

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

1 posted 2008-10-21 01:57 PM

Absolutly wonderful, I appreciate your work.

yann

Misty Lilacs
Senior Member

since 2005-11-15

Posts 1060
White Birch Forest

2 posted 2008-10-21 02:41 PM

You are an amazing poet and I always look forward to your words.

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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

3 posted 2008-10-21 08:01 PM

of all your poetry
i think this is my new fav

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

4 posted 2008-10-21 08:02 PM

Fine Romanticism!

applause!

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2008-10-21 08:42 PM

A wonderful romantic write.
Much was said in a few words, with nothing overstated.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2008-10-22 06:27 AM

lovely to read and contemplate~~
M

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

7 posted 2008-10-22 08:18 PM

I am so envious.

I want a "sarah" too...

You hit the softest homeruns with your words, John.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

8 posted 2008-10-23 09:30 PM

Like a deep pool of cool water, soothing.
Ida

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

9 posted 2008-10-26 09:44 AM

We all need such respite... in person as well as place. And how lucky we are if we can find such a person, even for a while. Beautiful write!

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

10 posted 2008-10-26 10:49 AM

Enjoyed the Write!

ARCTIC WIND

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

11 posted 2008-10-26 02:33 PM

REading this again, just to let you know daughter's name is Sara (no h).
Thank you, John, for the wonderful reply you left in Announcements. I hope to return to the board soon.

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

12 posted 2008-10-26 02:58 PM

That was lovely

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

13 posted 2008-10-28 09:48 PM

Enjoyed...James

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

14 posted 2008-11-05 06:51 AM

your words are simply beautiful John ..
love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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