Open Poetry #43 |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
Another silly old rambling found Well, today was too hot to go fishing So, I looked around and found me a tree I wrote a tune about all I've been missing and how life seems to be slipping by me. At night time, I sleep like a baby I've always dreamed 'neath the sun My life is spent... sleeping and dreaming So it aint no wonder I can't get nothing done I like replaying my life in my mind I never know how it will end It's like a video I've had a long time, that one day I'll have to turn in But all in all... it's been a good show Even the bad parts were fun Kick me if you hear a horn blow Wake me when my dream is done Let the critics give all of their revues A comedy with too many lines It's been a long rental that's way overdue Tell God to be kind and rewind I've lived my life like a yo-yo Up and down and not knowing which I finally learned to take life slow and that it really does no good to b**** I found my center and that's where I'm staying Just me and the world going 'round Some folks don't know what I'm saying They can't tell their axis from a hole in the ground I like the view from my mind I like replaying my life in my head Each time seems longer than last time and if I see any credit... I'll know that I'm dead But all in all... it's been a good show Even the bad parts were fun Kick me if you hear a horn blow Wake me when my dream is done Let the critics give all of their revues A comedy with too many lines It's been a long rental,that's way overdue Tell God to be kind and rewind *** |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
"they can't tell their axis from a hole in the ground" (laughing) this appeals to my weird off-the-wall sense of humor in a big way. Weird poem, weird poet. Love a good laugh. Ida |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"axis" line is just too cool...enjoyed the vcr of your life...play it again, Sam... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
:smiles: |
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