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vandana

Deputy Moderator 5 Tours

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2008-10-19 12:42 PM

Don't Take Love Away

Don't take love away
From us
Make this love last forever
Don't take this love away
Love is so precious
Let us make this love
For a day and forever
Don't take this love away
Love stands high
And when leaves falls down
On the ground
In circles round and round
Find this love so precious
When autumn night comes
The moon shimmer slowly
to the sea
Still you feel love is so precious
Don't take love away
from us

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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2008-10-19 01:16 PM

And when leaves falls down
On the ground
In circles round and round
Find this love so precious
When autumn night comes
The moon shimmer slowly
to the sea

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Just so pretty vandana, both the sentiment and your presentation.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2008-10-19 01:31 PM

vandana - very telling write of thoughts and love...

BC

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2008-10-19 03:37 PM

Dear Vandana, who could resist your heartfelt, intense plea to keep this love alive? May it last forever!

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2008-10-21 01:12 PM

You are a believer
that will always stand tall

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

5 posted 2008-10-22 03:58 PM

Yo dear Vandana,

Love is always a good thing to have. You express it well.

Love Bobby

Janette

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Member Elite

since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

6 posted 2008-10-25 12:37 PM

"And when leaves falls down
On the ground
In circles round and round"

Enjoyed!

Janette

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

7 posted 2008-10-25 08:51 PM

Great write Vandana, love is the most important facet of life that we can enjoy.
don't ever lose it. Good luck.

Lindsay

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

8 posted 2008-10-25 09:10 PM

Enjoyed your love poem of thought!

ARCTIC WIND

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

9 posted 2008-10-27 11:41 PM

hold on

The only time we waste is the time we spend thinking we are alone.

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