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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
This day, this number on the calendar, has been standing in line between yesterday and tomorrow patiently waiting to pass through my life like the shadow of a dream. As the day draws to a close it will draw a new wrinkle on my face to create the illusion of time and within minutes now it will be gone. Though I will not know where it went ...or why. Ida Werrett |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very profound, dear Ida. Being aware of the moment, which is the only time we really have, doesn't exclude our wondering ... This Day, this moment, we are connected and I send you a big hug. Love, Margherita |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
The elusive time is well captured. a great poem |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
well done my friend Ida...enjoyed your thoughts here.. love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello Ida, you are right, Time pass for everyone, even poets, Thanks to your thoughtful write. yann |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
There really is only the here and now, today. The sun is up and there is beauty everywhere I look. The Good Lord is generous with her gifts. Thanks for this, Ms. Madness~  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Marchmadness - time passes faithfully for sure. Written well about it... BC |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Dear Ida, time marches on, something we can't avoid but there is something wonderful in every stage in our life and it is up to each and every one of us to make the most of life's stages as we go along, and enjoy them as well. love to you dear lady. Lindsay |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Ida, Every day presents a new oppertunity to do the right thing, and to fight the good fight. Bobby |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
such a poetic passage of time's existentiality...extreme applause |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Thank you all so much for the kind comments. Ida |
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Callista Member
since 2008-10-05
Posts 63USA |
This was really nice and fleeting, like the mark of time... "The Moving Finger writes, and, having writ, |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
ida poetess i love your work |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
grand-fine 'reflection' on transience and flux! applause for this 'penning'! |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Time keeps marching on, It moves through us like a cold wind, And ours will be gone long before we’re ready, You have to make time, To take time, To enjoy the time you have made. WTBAKELAR |
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