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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Each day Brings fewer leaves On the trees outside Those that remain Are brightly colored In the last moments Before they die There is An October chill In the air Along the shore No crickets sing The light fades To red and then To deepest blue As the sun Goes down . |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
what an eye you have |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
wonderful seizure of the seasons. yann |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
and the seasons march on...and time passes...you caught the aura of the changing times so well |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
may we too manage to be "brightly colored In the last moments Before (we) die" fine impressionistic, cascading Autumn imagery! applause for this 'penning'! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Lovely poem, perfect title. Ida |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Reminded me of my old Chevy, that just rusted to a real pretty brown and slowly returned itself to the earth. It was a Chevy Nova. |
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