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Jaime Fradera
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0 posted 2008-10-18 02:26 PM



I demand a hug.

I demand a hug, right now.

I am very, very demanding!

(So, like Romantic heart says)

come over here, right now!

Stop what you're doing

and just come over here, right now,

or I'll go over there and just TAKE you.

I want a big, full body hug.

I want you to hug me real close and real tight.

I want to be close to you in spirit,

because bodies can just get in the way, you know.

I demand a hug.

I am very, very demanding.

Please don't make me come get you ...

I demand a hug,

and it has to be with you, right now!

Please? ... ... ... ...

Please? ... .... ...

Please? ... ... ...

Inspired by a sunny day

WITH you

Jaime


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2islander2
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1 posted 2008-10-18 04:32 PM


so sweet and lovely, I love romantic lines...

yann

Jaime Fradera
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2 posted 2008-10-18 05:45 PM


Thank you Yan.  I like writing them as much as you like reading them.  Jaime

Friendship is for Life, if not Forever.

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3 posted 2008-10-18 07:09 PM


Hey Jaime,

I am sending tons of hugs your way because you said please.  This is fun and shows a side of you that makes me smile.

Hugs to you, my friend.
Alison

Jaime Fradera
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4 posted 2008-10-18 08:13 PM


Ali! Thank you! but now I have have an insatiable and irrational craving for m-and-ms.  Bring me m-and-ms. I want more M-and-ms. More! ... More! ... more! ...
(it's okay I can just pick up a large bug of them at Safeway tomorrow).
I wish I could send you more than a million hugs and the tenders series of playful kisses ...
Because it is bitterly cold there.
And you are such a warm and giving heart.
Jaime

Friendship is for Life, if not Forever.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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5 posted 2008-10-19 06:11 AM


Hi Jaime... I'm sending some hugs your way too!

oh and I demand a Black Amex card please!   

love your writings.... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Alison
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6 posted 2008-10-19 04:14 PM


Jaime,

It's not all the cold really.  It's been between -10 and 10.  Quite a bit of snow and life goes on.

Roniece,

You made me laugh out loud.

Love to you both.
A

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