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2islander2
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by the sea

0 posted 2008-10-16 11:17 AM


Take off, take off, boeing 747,
unstick towards the discolored azure,
set on fire the tablecloth of clouds,
punish the sky of its one-sided lightnesses,
cross the historical Atlantic
and its neurotic anticyclones,
move the giant Pacific,
face the cultural thunderstorms,
abandon your passengers
in the resolute claws
of the anonymous airports,
Take off, take off Boeing 747,
make dream about our minds….

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Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2008-10-16 12:52 PM


Wow, dear Yann, you take off beautifully with your poem I would say!

Enjoyed this very much.

Love,
Margherita


2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
2 posted 2008-10-16 02:21 PM


Dear Margherita, I always admire the big planes when they take off abruptly towards the sky, there is such freedom in these flights and new countries to discover, there is so powerful engines lifting these monsters...Wouah I feel everytime a lot of inside emotions when I watch the show....Thank you for your regarding comment...

yann

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