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WTBAKELAR
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0 posted 2008-10-15 02:28 PM


How does she know, was asked of me,
I could only tell her from experience,


If she felt something the first time they met,
If she felt it more the next time and if it keeps getting stronger each time they see each other,
If she feels like, although she has only known him a short time,
if she feels like a part of her heart would be torn out and lost if he was not part of her life,
If being with him brings her the warmth and comfort and security like she has never felt before,
If just the touch of his hand in hers, makes her soul tremble,
If saying goodbye is the hardest thing for her to do,
If he is happier being with her than without her,   And,
IF, after all the "What if's" and "Who knows" doesn't matter more than the burning in her heart,



Then Fall In Love.

The answer is always NO, Until the question is asked.

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Margherita
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1 posted 2008-10-15 04:46 PM


Yes, it's all part of falling in love and you expressed this in a captivating way.

Very enjoyable!

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

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