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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2008-10-13 06:47 AM

the fine time to knead autumn
is before the dawn lady dances
when the 15 has no body jewelry on

and the highway boys are atrested
in parking lot hotels, code something
that takes a bit longer than a donut

I can feel the leather of my skin
rolling over bone end pebbles
like pizza boys knuckling dough

there is an old man in the mirrors
but he is not me anymore
since the blood of the copperhead changed

vegas is still just the cardboard boxes
with sweat leather and mascara
over plastic bags with hungry eyes

and tomorrows are just half a throttle gone
_______________

daark (owg-ish)

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-10-13 07:50 AM

quote:
the fine time to knead autumn
is before the dawn lady dances
when the 15 has no body jewelry on

I guess you are talking in these incredibly fascinating terms about a route? Wow!

And owg is still a mystery ...

But what I "get" is of such great poetic impact!

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2008-10-13 09:16 AM

Ms mar

Just a highway (15) moan about a ride to Vegas between midnight and dawn. Thanks lady.

WTBAKELAR

Senior Member

since 2008-09-09

Posts 1089
Utah, USA

3 posted 2008-10-13 05:00 PM

Ya know, Dark, The way you write makes me wish I was a better writer, or stoned, I'm really not sure which. But I do know that I enjoy reading you.. You make me think,(mostly what the heck is he talking about)but you make me read you and think.
Well done.. Tracey

The answer is always NO, Until the question is asked.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2008-10-13 05:02 PM

tracey...then I am doing what the prozac intended...thanks for the read. this is just highway stuff on the way to vegas..nasty bore harleys at midnight and so many miles of highway.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2008-10-13 08:14 PM

and tomorrows are just half a throttle gone

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That's such a fine line, and worth the ride every time I'll bet!!

So glad to see OWG is alive and well!!

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

6 posted 2008-10-13 08:23 PM

makes me wish I was there for the ride Mr Daark.. wonderful writing here! love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2008-10-13 10:19 PM

ms bluezy, thanks babe...you ought to see what he rides now..

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ms r&b, thanks ms for the read

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

8 posted 2008-10-14 12:40 PM

quote:
there is an old man in the mirrors
but he is not me anymore
since the blood of the copperhead changed

Wonderful writing, D. Thank you for taking me on the ride.

A

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

9 posted 2008-10-14 07:17 AM

Ms ali-san. Thank you for looking in.

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