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Mystique |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Mystique Night has lost her modesty To the intention of the moon Illuminating the secrets of billowed black Velvet waves expose a once concealed fringe Flooding gold, upon the lids of autumn’s singe Provoking the pale underbelly of innocence Night has lost her modesty Left in moist breath and destiny Damp upon the grass Copyright Kkh 10/12/08 |
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SILENCEisTHEquestion Junior Member
since 2008-10-12
Posts 10 |
"Night has lost her modesty" What a beautiful line! I wonder if it losses some power when used twice? Great read though! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
It is always a treat to read you, dear Kathleen! Enticing write. Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
A artful imagination ou have caught with nice rhythm. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
This is lovely, Kathleen. Helen |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
what a lovely write...too many places to point out individually, so permit me to say that it is all lovely... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Beautiful imagery, and a well developed metaphor. Take a bow, Kathleen. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Very beautiful, Kathleen. A magick feel to it. Ida |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
your words of sea and moons and velvet seductive as always |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful! Love, Eric |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
another stunner from you-- you are elegant, yanno?  |
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gadfly4you Junior Member
since 2004-01-24
Posts 37 |
Silky to the tongue, I liked tasting this...Very nice :-) |
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