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Lost in you ... Paris ramblings Cont'd
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Lost in you ... Paris ramblings Cont'd |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia 
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I always wonder about destiny and fate and chance and luck and how they play a part in our lives... the following thoughts fit nicely with my thinking.. It was a sunny day in Paris And I was looking for coffee and conversation to fill my day I found your bar at the end of my street You were smiling and speaking warmly In French tones with the locals I struggled with my French but you said ‘it’s OK, I speak English’ So I ordered a cafe creme (legere!) s.v.p. You laughed out loud at my French And ignored the others while you spoke with me And I hoped it wasn’t too obvious How I was smiling at the thought of being lost In you Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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SkaaDee Member
since 2008-04-07
Posts 116Canada |
lucky bartender  this poem is pretty |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Darlin', I love this and I love you. Ali |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
wouah Roniece, this is lovely and you surely made someone happy if he heard your thoughts....Thank you for sharing this one.... hugs yann |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
EXCELLENT 'slice of life' poetic Parisian 'Romantic Impressionism'! loud and sustained applause for this fine 'penning'! |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
To know Paris is to know the truth of self betrayal. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
A lovely poem Roniece, one never knows what the next moment of fate might bring, for you I hope it is joy, take care my friend, thank you for sharing. Rick |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear RDB, Paris leaves vivid, happy memories for anyone who has ever visited the place. It's a lovely place, full of lovely people. Love Bobby |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fun to read...I think it was obvious...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your candor is heartwarming. Such conversations and thoughts enrich life always. This is lovely. Love, Margherita |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
thank you everyone for taking the time to read my work... your comments smile me and warm my heart.. love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Destiny is a VERY interesting thing isn't it? Just something to sit back and think about it all day, and of course fit some writing time in for poetry! ARCTIC WIND |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
thanks lovely Michael.. you do make me smile too! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
if it wasn't obvious then it's obvious now lovely Roniece... just lovely |
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