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O love
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O love |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia 
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O love; you sit me by your side To view in joy of what could be To feel that burning deep inside And find a truth that’s part of me O love, you make my veins all run And heart to beat in different tune My darker side to feel the sun And lonesome side to find some room O love, you speak with voice so sweet And fill the air with beauties scent My heart and yours to slowly meet Entwined and blessed by heaven sent O love, you give for just a while And then your voice does whisper low And in a while does fade your smile And what we had does slowly go O love, I seek you once again You left without a word goodbye And loneliness which brings the pain Is taking space although I try O love, why do you disappear? And leave two souls to question why To live the years with thought and fear In wonder where to turn or cry O love, O love, the years go on But something deep stays warm from you It lights a hope that shines upon The love I had and once I knew --------------- So now in dreams its love I see To be with and her smiles to share And if it must, that’s where we’ll be Until I wake to find her there |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
mmmm..... O Rick this is divine!!  such wonderful words you have penned my friend... lovely, awesome and soooooo romantic!! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Roniece, it is so nice to have you visit and give such a wonderful reply my friend, thank you so much, it brings joy to my heart. Rick |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Rick - from good feelings to not so good, you've blended them well in this write... BC |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Hi Bill, good to see you here my friend, thank you for the visit and reply, appreciated. Rick |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Rick, This is incredible - you kind of swept me along with the emotions and the beauty. Thank you for letting me read and feel your words. Alison |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Alison, it is a pleasure to share these few words with you my friend, thank you so much for your lovely reply and visit, as always greatly appreciated. Rick |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
vandana, thank you for taking the time to read and comment my friend, very much appreciated. Rick |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, this is such a beautiful and truly romantic song of your heart, dear Rick! Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Margherita, lovely to have you visit and reply here my friend, thank you so much, I always appreciated your comments. Rick |
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