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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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0 posted 2008-10-10 01:05 AM


These thoughts were penned for my Mom's Anniversary while I was in Paris... 16 years on and I still miss her every day..


A sadness is felt today
as I remember my beautiful Mother
always there
happy
smiling
laughing
she was kind beyond measure
she was generous and good
she gave her time to all
and never complained
my heart misses her
my soul feels her absence
on this day her anniversary falls...




Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

[This message has been edited by Roniece Dawson-Bruce (10-10-2008 02:08 AM).]

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1 posted 2008-10-10 04:24 AM


Roniece~
The number of the years make no difference ... the memories that our mothers made ... make ALL the difference~

Like you, I remember soooooo many tender moments of my mother being in my life ... she left the memories, making sure that I would have the cherish of such a treasure trove to leaf through on anniversary moments like this~

Special little *huglets* for you dear~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 2008-10-10 04:30 AM


thank you my dear precious friend Marge... I will take your huglets and cherish them ..

love
RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Rick
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3 posted 2008-10-10 07:03 AM


Your write beautiful words Roniece, your mother would be so proud of your gift and your thoughts of her on the day. Have a wonderful night my friend and take care.

Rick

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 2008-10-10 07:21 AM


Rick.. thank you so very much for your kind and generous comments on my work.. you are a very beautiful soul.. love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

1slick_lady
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5 posted 2008-10-10 08:28 AM


roniece
we never get over
the missing of our mother's
sadly beautiful


Robert E. Jordan
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6 posted 2008-10-10 09:02 AM


Yo dear RDB,

This is a lovely "mother" poem.  It's very well done.

Love Bobby

K-K
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7 posted 2008-10-10 10:10 AM


the sense of loss never goes away, I am so sorry for your sadness. Thanks for sharing
2islander2
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8 posted 2008-10-10 06:02 PM


Hi Roniece, true words are the best...This is vibrant and beautiful....

hugs

  yann

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9 posted 2008-10-11 05:22 AM


You expressed your feelings very lovingly, dear Roniece. A loving Mother is the most precious gift and it lasts forever.

Love,
Margherita

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10 posted 2008-10-11 10:47 AM


good one
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11 posted 2008-10-14 06:41 PM


a touching write Roniece!


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12 posted 2008-10-14 09:25 PM


I felt this one, Roniece. My daughter passed away in May of 2000 and I miss her every day. Your mother must have been a great lady to have a daughter like you.
                                Ida

LindsayP
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13 posted 2008-10-14 11:09 PM



Dear Roniece, your mum sounds like she was a wonderful Lady and what other conclusion could we come to with a daughter like you.

It is always a tragic loss when we loose our parents and I know exactly how you feel. My sincerest sympathy my dear. Love

Lindsay  

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