Open Poetry #43 |
Cherubim and Seraphim Attend To Bones |
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Cherubim and Seraphim gently take Bones by the hands. Lead him up, and right straight through the pearly gates. There’s a wild party going on, and it’s all to say hello to Bones. There’s all the food he ever dreamt about, and it’s all spread out for him. He’s outfitted with just the clothes that he really wants. He’s warm and truly comfortable for the first time in his life. The Big Guy shakes Bone’s hand, and tells him he can stay forever. Tells Bones he’ll never be hungry, cold, hot, or naked again. The Big Guy never lies. It’s all a great, big, glorious party. Bobby [This message has been edited by Robert E. Jordan (07-17-2008 11:42 AM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This could be paradise for Bones as he imagined it when he was ill ... it's said, that when we move on we might find what we imagine before we move on. I love this welcome party for Bones, dear Bobby. Love, Margherita |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Margherita, I have an idea Bones loved the party too. He was immediately inducted into the Cherubim and Seraphim gang. He’s one of the thinner members. Thanks for your kind words on this poem. Love Bobby |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Lovely! And Flicka was there to give him his first horse ride! I read your other poem, where Bones was ill, but had to rush, so didn't have time to reply. - Owl |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Great write! Eric |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Owl, I'm glad Flicka was there to greet him. Thanks for reading, and your kind words. Love Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Ericc, I'm very pleased that you like the poem. Bobby |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Yay! A well deserved welcome for Bones, I have no doubt! ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks XGarapanX, Yes, something finally came Bone's way. Bobby |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I like happy endings. Ida |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Ida, I give all my stories happy endings. Love Bobby |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
It is kind of sad that Bones would have to wait until the after life for true happiness when this world is still full of joy to be found. |
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