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gator89
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0 posted 2008-10-09 04:35 PM


"Life's Gamble"

These white walls keep my mind free
From the world I shouldn't see
So decorate them black
Color what we lack

Label what we do not understand
Just to yield our souls damned
Feed the mind's addiction
Deny our own affliction

To say I have no sin is vice
Life becomes a roll of dice
So place your bet
And then think twice

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1 posted 2008-10-09 05:20 PM


gator..Enjoyed this. Very good flow. Hope to read more of your poems in the future.
Welcome to Passions... Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

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