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gator89 Junior Member
since 2008-10-08
Posts 12Ohio, USA |
hi! this is my first post of hopefully many to come! thanks for the welcome! "Not We" What I am, to who I used to be An angel, who's love created me A feeling that I want to hate A forlorned death without wait Inside me nothing seems to please Life's greatest plessure, unconcieved Tossed and turned by struggled mind A curse of her leaves me blind Who I am, to what I used to be A devil, who's love prostrated me What I am, to who I used to be An angel, who's love created me A feeling I can only hate A forlorned death, I cannot wait Inside me nothing seems to pleasee Life's greatest pleasure; sanity Ripped and torn by passions felt Aphrodite's wrath is dealt Who I am, to what we used to be Our love, that is only felt by me |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ah that ole one-sided love thing - been there, and wore that t-shirt! Welcome to Passions. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
love your ending...well put...good work...welcome to PiP |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome to Passions, gator89.  Unrequited love is a classical love topic, one both poets and non-poets relate to personally! I hope to read more from your pen. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Welcome to PiP, Dan. It will be great to read more of your poetry. Thanks for sharing. Alison |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions, Dan! Please Check your email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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sklagurl17 Junior Member
since 2008-09-08
Posts 43nc. |
This was great. Welcome. I look forward to reading more. -Tabitha |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
and a warm down under welcome from me too Dan! I like your work and looking forward to reading more of you  love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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