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| Open Poetry #43 |
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to write of love |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
I thought I'd write of love and passion On tablets rare by joy divine Of moonlit nights and soft carresses When your cheeks lay like satin against mine I thought I'd write of love's sweet song That savors soft breaths' cryings As touches fill with nectars sweet Soaked by passion's wordless sighings I thought I'd write of love and all The awe that comes from playing Life's sweetest game God gave to man That keeps our souls from fraying Alas, my muse stands tall with cautious words and with a shout, "Write not, my friend, of something you know so little about." ah, sweet muse |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
steavenr, Now this is a poem of love and passion, as I read the words and follow the feelings. Well written, and well versed... BC |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Seems to me you know plenty , because you feelings flowed so beautifully Hope |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
BC, you are way too kind, but I am not too proud to take an undeserved compliment any day...thank you, sir Hope, you are right...I am caught. I have known love and it has taught me far more than I could ever put down on paper in one lifetime. One thing that I have noticed...it never takes itself too seriously. Thank you for your kind and observant comments. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
wonderful Steaven! just wonderful! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
RDB, thank you so much for kindly commenting...it is appreciated |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
~Grin My first impulse was to say...well, you sure know the words... and if your feet feel the music...then dance man...dance! Hugs. I think you write from a true heart. Enjoyed! |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
TD, Thanks for seeing what you see...I appreciated the kind comments...thank you for stopping by and leaving your reply |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Great write this one Steav, I really enjoyed this post my friend, keep them coming. Lindsay |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Lindsay, glad you enjoyed...as for keeping them coming, I can only hope... Steaven |
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