Open Poetry #43 |
Letting Go |
Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Letting Go Little boy with hair in curl, Pretty as most any girl. Feed you well to make you grow, Wishing time would go more slow. Watching with attentive eye, Guarding from the tricks you try. Climbing in the apple tree, Falling, may you fall on me. Proud I am to see you growing Even though its with the knowing Each step is one more step away From the little boy I love today. For just this while I hold you tight, Tuck you in to sleep at night, Playing my part in the bigger plan For the little boy, too soon a man. By: Joyce 7/16/08 |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Joyce, This is a sweet read. It reminds me so much of my mother. I was ever so lucky to have her. Love Bobby |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
And to the top you go...this is wonderful! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Very nice, Joyce. Ida |
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Musel Junior Member
since 2008-07-17
Posts 34 |
you excellently captured the emotions one goes through as we watch our kids grow up and make into adults.. The contrast between the love and sadness was very well executed. A lovely read |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Don't I know it, Joyce! Enjoyed your poem, as always. - Owl |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Enjoyed your poem... yann |
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