Open Poetry #43 |
Gift of Fire |
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Gift of Fire If I could write to passion’s page As flames engulf these words I wage Immerse the soul, surround the heart A weld so sure these flames impart This place inside, joyful and warm Enduring time both soft and strong Burns lasting red as sparks renew In soothing hours of midnight hue A gift of fire, pure white the light Each day a dream fueled to ignite This simple beacon leads me on Into your heart, my true heart’s home The softest flame leaves mark in truth As all is fused in living proof If I could write to passion’s page A gift of fire, sweet lyre of sage Copyright Kkh 10/4/08 |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, dear Kathleen, what a wonderful gift of fire! You do write passion so incredibly well! Love, Margherita |
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turbulent_melody Junior Member
since 2008-10-01
Posts 22Australia |
Absolutely lovely piece of writing! Poetry in its purest form. I hope one day to create something as magical as this. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You jest? For certainly dear TD...you do write passionately...often, brilliantly. Without doubt... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A truly lovely write, Kathleen. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ThisDiamond, You do write with passion, always. BC |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This eloquently expressed poem of flaming love is, most assuredly, a "Gift of Fire". TD, that is Grade A ink that you use! ~ and it is indelible!!! EA |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
thoughtfully keen write...filled with passion...loved it...thank you for sharing |
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