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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
like flowing waters down a mountain stream darkness stills the hush of night disposing droplets in a late fall rain cleansing, cooling, refreshing thoughts renew and hopes regain feelings of solitude, measures of hope couplings of conscientiousness again seedlings of sentient sentiments bringing life to barren refrains eternity blossoms in anticipation looking to the circle to explain life's meanderings, life's pathways o, blessed thought-strokes how softly you ease the pain |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Night calls all the demons, past and present, to sate. I look forward to dawn with renewed hope. I've felt this. Well done. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Your words transcend time and space, and have a deliciously soothing effect on this reader. Thank you. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I am drawing these thought waters around my shoulder like a soft blanket . . . and am being gently lulled to a sweet dream sleep . . . Thoughts are one of our greatest gifts, but the sad thing is that so few know that. I am glad that you are one of the few. - Owl |
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turbulent_melody Junior Member
since 2008-10-01
Posts 22Australia |
Beautiful, just beautiful. Thankyou. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your pen strokes are scriptions of poetically pleasing thought-strokes. I do so enjoy reading your poetry!  Thank you for this pause that refreshed me. Sending a warm, autumnal hug, Linda  |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
TD, Your comments are as rich as your poetry...thanks for taking the time to read and comment...I appreciate it greatly. Midnitesun, Your words were so magnicent that I had to check to see if you were commenting on my work...I humbly thank you. Owl, Welcome to the collective of the mind...thank you for reading and commenting turbulent_melody, first, welcome to PiP...and btw, thanks for the gracious and kind comments |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Linda, sorry that I missed you. You must have commented while I was thanking folks. You were so kind in your comments. Thank you so much. |
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