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Open Poetry #43

Laying Down The Law

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2008-10-01 02:46 PM

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Water Flows
Over old stones

Not today Harvey
Nor for some time
To come

It’s October now
My favorite month
With little patience
For argument
As to who or what
Was wrong

So if I say
The moon was hers
The stars
Her faithful cavaliers
There’ll be no objections
To my words

I decree
She was beautiful

Here and there
A leaf or two
Under an iron bridge

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serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2008-10-01 03:14 PM

"Not today Harvey"

that is not your most lovely line, but will likely be the one I steal to become part of my lingo.

a leaf or two

you made me smile yanno

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2008-10-01 11:18 PM

What a lovely way to "lay down the law"
Ida

WTBAKELAR

Senior Member

since 2008-09-09

Posts 1089
Utah, USA

3 posted 2008-10-02 05:20 PM

This is my favorite poem of yours so far.
I can see you sitting on the edge of the creek as the waters flow by. Thoughts race and wander.

Nice.

The answer is always NO, Until the question is asked.

Misty Lilacs
Senior Member

since 2005-11-15

Posts 1060
White Birch Forest

4 posted 2008-10-02 06:13 PM

Wonderful. And I love Harvey!!

I do the MS Walk everyday!

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

5 posted 2008-10-02 06:46 PM

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Thanks Everyone

For anyone curious:

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Thanks again

John

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