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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. October— Light brown hair And pale blue eyes A slender figure In a long wool coat Gliding among the trees . |
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JenniferMaxwell
since 2006-09-14
Posts 2423 |
This and your other October, really lovely, Huan. "A slender figure In a long wool coat Gliding among the trees" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This reminded me of my first girlfriend Billy...when we would meet at night in the moonlight halfway between her house and mine...James |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
very nice metaphor, enjoyed it.... yann |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Huan Yi, Enjoy reading your words, much said, and lovely... BC |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
John~ Softly sensual ... and just so very lovely~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
this is W O N D E R F U L!!  Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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