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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2008-10-01 06:50 AM

I find the waking more exciting
then the struggle to return to slumber
something about a kote sunrise
or her going down with a smile
just before the dawn bring rhythms

of hands on their masts
wanting to be the masters that drift
from some barbados to another cuba
with only sips of rum between
and a lifetime of eyes

my fingers find pens in the wings
of slow flying birds frozen in windows
jewelry store figurines that temp
can my words capture more lovely
than the shimmer of her skins

how she wears them as treasures
without the courtesy of buttons
and writhes musical positioning
without the guidance of a whisper
only the sighs she hears distant

as she places strangers behind her mind

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daark

Indigo
Senior Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 602

1 posted 2008-10-01 10:47 AM

Mmmmm.... speechless.

Indigo

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2008-10-01 06:27 PM

quote:
my fingers find pens in the wings
of slow flying birds frozen in windows
jewelry store figurines that temp
can my words capture more lovely
than the shimmer of her skins

You ride the highest waves of creativity and make me gasp for the stunning outcome ...

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2008-10-01 09:12 PM

You just write so nice, every single verse dips and sways....in your own easy way.
Honestly DS, this is quite the seduction!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2008-10-01 10:46 PM

my fingers find pens in the wings
of slow flying birds frozen in windows

~*~

Bless the birds who know
your pens....

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2008-10-02 06:26 AM

ms indi...I can't believe you said the "S" word in public...thanks babe

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ms mar, thanks lady friend for touching my pen here

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ms sun, you bless me with your eyes and sounds of comment, thank you

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ms bluezy, you make me smile babe...spank you very much

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