Open Poetry #43 |
Bones Is Born |
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Mom always was a very private person. She never did like to cause, or make a fuss. She had Bones in the dead of night. She cut the cord and did all that stuff, because she knew how to. She’d been around. Bobby (Author's note--"Don't try this at home. You might not get lucky." |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Now that is truly scary!!!! In the distant past, most were born at home, though rarely was the infant's umbilical chord severed by the mother! |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Kacy, I've only know one person that did this at home, and did not kill themselves, or the child. That was back in 1960. She was very lucky. Bobby |
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kanashe Member
since 2008-05-21
Posts 59america |
this gave me goosebumps enjoyed -ashe |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Let's say that there were at least two Angels there to assist her during the big event, hers and Bones'. You write of a very strong woman, no doubt, dear Bobby! Love, Margherita |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Ashe, I'm pleased you enjoyed the poem, and got goosebumps. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Margherita, Yes, probably so. Necessity is the mother of invention. She was a very small person. Love Bobby |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
More goosebumps for you. - Owl |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Now that is what I would call a strong woman! I suppose we never know what we are capable of until we are tested! The spirit of the pioneer woman was alive and well in her! ~ and thank goodness for her little bundle of Bones! Linda |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
I like Bone's Mom very much.. and I like Bones too love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hi Bobby, mothers are often great persons... nice write... yann |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear OwlSA, Thanks for the added goosebumps. I'm pleased it worked that way for you. Love Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Linda, Yes, Mom was a strong and brave woman--and of course, where would we be without brave Bones to show us the way. Mom and Bones say hello. Love Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear RDB, For the kind words on Mom and Bones. They love you right back. Love Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Yann, Yes, moms are the greatest. I'm pleased you enjoyed the poem. Bobby |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Robert E. Jordan, Had a few chills reading how 'Bones' was born... Chilling, goosebumping good write... BC |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Bill Charles, I'm pleased that you liked the poem, and got goosebumps. Bobby |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Your mum certainly sounds like a very strong lady Bobby, you were very lucky. Lindsay |
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pernickitypoppet New Member
since 2008-10-05
Posts 7Sth. Australia, Mannum |
Shivers up my spine. Lucky Bones. thankyou. pernickitypoppet |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Lindsay, Yes, my mother was a very strong person. This poem however is about Bones mother, who was also a very strong person. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Pernickitypoppet, I'm pleased this poem worked that way for you. Thanks for reading, and the nice comment. It's good to see you here. Bobby |
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