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Oklahoma Rose
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0 posted 2008-09-28 09:12 PM



Your Tender Touch

When you hold me in your arms
Nothing else matters
Your tender touch excites me
Causing such passion to grow
Whenever you are here with me
You brighten up my days
If I should be feeling down
You always know just what to do
To erase whatever comes my way
When my world comes tumbling down
As it often seems to do
When I am there with you my love
You make everything seem okay
Just your touch is all it takes
To make this heart just melt away
Promise me forever and
Make it all come true
For without you there beside me
Each day is hard to get through
For the love I feel inside me
I give it all to you

2008



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1 posted 2008-09-29 02:17 AM


sweet beautiful with feeling and heart love it...
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2 posted 2008-09-29 02:39 AM


You made me smile with this one - it is a very tender poem.

Alison

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3 posted 2008-09-29 04:14 PM


MzOklahomaRose~
Look at you getting all romantic with these gorgeous thoughts~

Lovely ... *sighs*~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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BluesSerenade
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4 posted 2008-09-29 04:32 PM


Love is a many splendored thing, and then some.

sweet sweet poem~

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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5 posted 2008-09-29 10:54 PM


oh I do love this one Sue!

wonderful!

love
RDB

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Earth Angel
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6 posted 2008-09-30 12:24 PM


Oh, romance looks so good on you! ~ and you write it so tenderly.

A lovely, romantic write!  

Love 'n hugs,
Linda

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7 posted 2008-09-30 09:59 AM


I like the romantic side of you~~


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Sunshine
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8 posted 2008-09-30 01:42 PM


Sue, I'm so smiling at you!




JamesMichael
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9 posted 2008-09-30 06:39 PM


NIce...James
LindsayP
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10 posted 2008-09-30 10:39 PM



Sue that is so good, a sweet tender romantic poem, I loved it. Love

Lindsay

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11 posted 2008-09-30 11:18 PM




ahhh I love romance
and you do it so well




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