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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2008-09-27 07:26 PM



Perhaps Some Lust

"A walk on Waikiki Beach on a
sizzling hot day in September."

Beach bunnies soaking up
the warm Hawaiian sun.

Afternoon spent surfing
to spice up the fun.

Beach attire seems to shrink
a bit more each passing year.

Admiring men enjoying the scene
grinning from ear to ear.

JamesLee
25September
2008


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Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2008-09-27 07:28 PM


Yo James,

This is very nice.

Been there, done that.

Bobby

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
2 posted 2008-09-27 08:48 PM


That's a great snap shot, James!!  

Good job!!!

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
3 posted 2008-09-28 02:28 AM


I so enjoyed the atmosphere of your poem and their saying, Hawai is a dream...

have a nice day

  yann

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4 posted 2008-09-28 10:05 PM


You made me laugh with this one, James.  

A

LindsayP
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5 posted 2008-09-29 12:18 PM



You paint a lovely picture James.

Lindsay

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