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Open Poetry #43

Perhaps Some Lust

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2008-09-27 07:26 PM

Perhaps Some Lust

"A walk on Waikiki Beach on a
sizzling hot day in September."

Beach bunnies soaking up
the warm Hawaiian sun.

Afternoon spent surfing
to spice up the fun.

Beach attire seems to shrink
a bit more each passing year.

Admiring men enjoying the scene
grinning from ear to ear.

JamesLee
25September
2008

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2008-09-27 07:28 PM

Yo James,

This is very nice.

Been there, done that.

Bobby

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2008-09-27 08:48 PM

That's a great snap shot, James!!

Good job!!!

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

3 posted 2008-09-28 02:28 AM

I so enjoyed the atmosphere of your poem and their saying, Hawai is a dream...

have a nice day

yann

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

4 posted 2008-09-28 10:05 PM

You made me laugh with this one, James.

A

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

5 posted 2008-09-29 12:18 PM

You paint a lovely picture James.

Lindsay

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