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The Forbidden Fruit
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The Forbidden Fruit |
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Bloodlust New Member
since 2008-09-05
Posts 4 |
Can you taste the apple cinnamon lip gloss on my lips? There's no right or wrong when you're with me. This distance forbids us to meet like exiling us from a blissful paradise. Can you smell the sweet apple scented shampoo in my hair? The way it lays on your pillows innocently. Green thornless vines slowly wrap around my heart like a snake attending its paralyzed prey. Pulling me towards you that I'm willing to go the distance. Can you smell the irresistible apple scented lotion on my skin? Waiting. To be devoured by you. [This message has been edited by Bloodlust (09-27-2008 06:02 PM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The apple and cinnamon goes perfectly with your title. I guess that was the idea. Sweet stuff, Bloodlust~ |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
first, welcome to PiP...next-- scents, moods, tastes all combine to make this one enjoyable write...nicely done |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You made me hungry. Welcome to PiP. Alison |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Welcome to the PIPzoo BL...it is always a pleasure to read of the forbidden... |
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Bloodlust New Member
since 2008-09-05
Posts 4 |
Thank you everyone for welcoming me. ^^ It's always a pleasure to write the forbidden. :P |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
"Now thats one Hot Piece of apple pie" Welcome home. Nicely done. The answer is always NO, Until the question is asked. |
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