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Bloodlust
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0 posted 2008-09-27 04:24 PM


Can you taste the apple cinnamon lip gloss on my lips?
There's no right or wrong when you're with me.
This distance forbids us to meet like exiling us from a blissful paradise.
Can you smell the sweet apple scented shampoo in my hair?
The way it lays on your pillows innocently.
Green thornless vines slowly wrap around my heart like a snake attending its paralyzed prey.
Pulling me towards you that I'm willing to go the distance.
Can you smell the irresistible apple scented lotion on my skin?
Waiting.
To be devoured by you.

[This message has been edited by Bloodlust (09-27-2008 06:02 PM).]

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BluesSerenade
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1 posted 2008-09-28 09:24 AM


The apple and cinnamon goes perfectly with your title.

I guess that was the idea.  Sweet stuff, Bloodlust~


steavenr
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2 posted 2008-09-28 08:42 PM


first, welcome to PiP...next-- scents, moods, tastes all combine to make this one enjoyable write...nicely done
Alison
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3 posted 2008-09-29 01:46 AM


You made me hungry.  Welcome to PiP.

Alison

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4 posted 2008-09-29 06:22 AM


Welcome to the PIPzoo BL...it is always a pleasure to read of the forbidden...
Bloodlust
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5 posted 2008-09-29 11:57 AM


Thank you everyone for welcoming me. ^^

It's always a pleasure to write the forbidden. :P

WTBAKELAR
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6 posted 2008-09-29 12:47 PM


"Now thats one Hot Piece of apple pie"
Welcome home.  Nicely done.

The answer is always NO, Until the question is asked.

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