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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
whisper quietly, sweet love… stay longer cautiously caress, my beloved… linger near stay sweetly, love-sung… be close sigh gently, my heart… wait softly let me learn by your fragrance that hope’s alive and fear allays teach me with your laugh-dance that love supersedes all ways that nearness is dearness defined, that your heart is knit-sole with mine |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
mmm... soft and warm like a cinnamon bun fresh from the oven. I like this. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
mmmmmmm...cinnabuns...I'm there...oh, and thanks for the comment...why am I hungry? |
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graeshine2006 Member
since 2008-06-03
Posts 368The Prairie Lands, USA |
Ohhh, how I do like this one. Purrrfect, sensual, and comforting! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
cinnamon buns?? I haven't had sweet/carbs in so long I have forgotten what they taste like.... hmmm.... oh and I really loved the sweet of this poem..  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You are writing some beautiful poetry and I am enjoying each and every bite. Especially sweet verse here |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
graeshine, glad it struck a chord with you...thank's for reading and commenting Susan, way too much talk about food...not really, never too much talk about anything with cinnamon...thank you for taking time to comment TD, thank you...high praise from someone with your talents...I am humbled |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I adore the sweet scent of love you wrote here. So very nicely done, I'm glad I went looking. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Blues, thank you for your search and your very kind comments |
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