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Open Poetry #43

Her Kiss

WTBAKELAR

Senior Member

since 2008-09-09

Posts 1089
Utah, USA

0 posted 2008-09-26 10:49 AM

Her Kiss

There are no words,
In the language I know,
That can describe,
The scent of her skin,

What she does to me,
So soft to the touch,
As her warmth
Pulls me within,

She smiles at me,
With a look so demure,
And her lips speak
Without saying a word,

I inhale of her breath,
Cling to her embrace,
Search for that
Emotion conferred,

Deeper and softer,
Than seems possible,
This wet and
Trembling bliss,

I long for each moment,
I crave greedily,
And look forward,
To her next kiss.

Wm. Tracey Bakelar
2008

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-09-26 10:56 AM

This kiss holds a burning moment of desire ... and you render it with adequate passion!

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

2 posted 2008-09-26 01:00 PM

Body language says so much

Hope

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2008-09-26 07:15 PM

Beautiful indeed!!

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

4 posted 2008-09-27 10:33 AM

beautiful moment described ever so beautifully...nice write

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2008-09-27 07:28 PM

Nice...James

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

6 posted 2008-09-29 01:04 AM

A passionate poem to say the least and so beautifully written. well done.

Lindsay

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