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These Silent Teardrops Fall
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These Silent Teardrops Fall |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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 These Silent Teardrops Fall This broken hearted melody Has played on and on As blue sets the tone While I am missing someone Here playing on heartstrings Tunes lonely and blue The tears start to flow I was feeling lost without you Your guitar playing the blues I reminisce yesteryears Sad emotions outpour Along the tracks of my tears The songs you played to me Its your love I still recall Yet I feel the heartache As these silent teardrops fall Hope ©2008 |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Its your love I still recall Yet I feel the heartache As these silent teardrops fall You write sad well, I have been there, done that. It always gets better. I use my poetry to bring me and others happiness. Yours does the same for me. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Hope my dear, that is so sad, I really feel for you. With all the friends you have on PIP you should feel much happier than that. We are all pulling for you Hope, Love Lindsay |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
No one remains indifferent to the language of your heart, dear Hope! Let not the past overshadow your present life too much though. You write beautifully. Love and hugs. Margherita  "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
wow...our muses must have been in conference...didn't see this before I posted 'teardrops'...how hauntingly similar they are...nice work |
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