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vandana
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0 posted 2008-09-24 05:59 PM




You Are.......

You are my sunshine
That shines my eyes away
To the wind
that blows
my mind away
You are the light
That brings morning
You are the night
you make my night so beautiful
You are my everything
Everything that counts
You are....
You are one to shine
my eyes away
You are my heart and soul
That takes my breathe away
You are the reason I found
You are my love
That makes my heart away
You are my sunshine
You are...

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2008-09-25 12:01 PM


VanDana~
And YOU are a beautiful holder of lovely thoughts~
Thank you for always sharing the softer side of your heart and thoughts~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Margherita
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2 posted 2008-09-25 12:19 PM


Ahhh, dear Vandana, did you read this loud to the one you wrote it for? It is beautiful and will bring happiness.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

The Lady
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3 posted 2008-09-25 03:42 PM



beautiful Vandana...

BluesSerenade
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4 posted 2008-09-27 09:19 PM


What I enjoy about your poetry is that your heart is
always in the right place....always so full of love.

Nice vandana~

2islander2
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5 posted 2008-09-28 02:22 AM


Hello Vandana it is so refreshing and pure, enjoyed very much the reading....Your words sing ...

yann

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2008-09-30 06:27 PM


A pleasure to read...one of your best...James
LindsayP
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7 posted 2008-09-30 11:09 PM



Yes I think it is one of your best to

Vandana, so much enjoyed.

Lindsay

Sunshine
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8 posted 2008-10-01 10:42 PM


Vandana,

dear one....

You've written for some time now,
but this is as close to a perfection
of poetry I've ever seen from you.

Your growth has been simple but amazing...
you continue to write in a language not
of your own; but you have delved beautifully
and deeply.

I am so very proud of you!






Bill Charles
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9 posted 2008-10-03 04:37 PM


vandana,

The softness in your heart shows in your writings, well done with caring....

BC

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