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Open Poetry #43

ladles of arrow soup

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2008-09-24 06:27 AM

finding our way through the hallways
of nowhere in particular
like first time shoppers for love
that have never really put it on before

at least with the buttons and zippers
and tight places that don't fit right
until we move around together slowly
and make the confinement turn into easy

and comfortable with room to touch
and feel and want more knowing yes
is what we would hear from the other yes
waiting to have it all and then some

then we wait in line for moments
to see how it would end if it did
in our imaginations before the laughter
when we realize it don't have to

so we just stay there in our one place

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daark (white stone series)

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-09-24 09:13 AM

Funny title! No, it definitely "don't have to ...". As long as there is laughter the walk together need not end ...

Your poetry is of the kind that I never tire to read because of the incredibly unique creative appeal.

Love,
Margherita

Indigo
Senior Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 602

2 posted 2008-09-24 03:24 PM

shopping cart hearts find
blue light special on aisle five
marked down for quick sale.

Indigo

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