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Open Poetry #43

Bunnies in the Mist

WTBAKELAR

Senior Member

since 2008-09-09

Posts 1089
Utah, USA

0 posted 2008-09-23 01:51 PM

Bunnies in the Mist

Light comes slowly crawling,
Over the valley wide,
Last evenings moon dips
Below the trees,
Drifting to the other side,

The mist of an early fall,
With hints of mountain pine,
Shadows fade
With the new sunrise,
A morning so divine.

In the hidden meadow,
Wakes the fox and fawn,
They quietly leave
Their nightly sleep,
Moving with the dawn,

Through crisp fallen leaves of aspen,
And frost upon the ground,
They see a small
White puff of cotton,
Leaping with a bound,

Misty fog moves slowly,
Across the hills and dales,
The bunnies are playing
Hide and seek,
But the only thing seen is their tails.

Wm. Tracey Bakelar
2008

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-09-23 05:14 PM

This is truly very lovely! Deeply enjoyable read!

Love,
Margherita

WTBAKELAR

Senior Member

since 2008-09-09

Posts 1089
Utah, USA

2 posted 2008-09-23 05:18 PM

Thank you Dear Margherita,
I think you are one of my greatest fans.
I am so glad I found this site. I love all the wonderful tallent here.  I think it makes me a better poet.

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

3 posted 2008-09-23 09:52 PM

Tracey, that is a lovely poem painted with

a real clear word picture. Take a bow my dear and have a great day.

Lindsay

WTBAKELAR

Senior Member

since 2008-09-09

Posts 1089
Utah, USA

4 posted 2008-09-25 05:32 PM

Thank you for your kind words. I love Autumn, and all the wonderful poems of the season.
Tracey.

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