Open Poetry #43 |
south 30 just across from dawn |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sometimes I lean on the light pole and watch smoke from my gurkha climb into the back seat night sky like a patron drunk from life there are coffee smells lingering like jackets on the mist's sleeves and I wipe my nose on them like it was pretending to be winter more for the smell to seduce me more than your perfume did back then when you said you were not wearing any and it was just you wanting me to never remember the scent of woman and the sounds you made driving reckless back from someone's rincon afternoon that we stole for a few hours and never returned for a refund from ___________________ daark |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
That beautifully elusive scent... one that can be found only when standing close to love. Beautiful...as I've come to expect, and never regret. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms sun thank you babe. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
the smell of coffee and your gurkha you always hit just the right note stanger darlin' |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ladyone. A pleasure to linger in you shadow places. Thanks ms |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
salt marsh and tar pits, olfactory pages from a rincon dream book. Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms indi. And your footprints are still there sometimes. Between the waving pages. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Such unique thought patterns. I love your memories, dear D.! Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thank you sweet lady |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
quote: I love this more than I can express right now. I just fell in love with that part. A |
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