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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2008-09-23 05:52 AM



sometimes I lean on the light pole
and watch smoke from my gurkha climb
into the back seat night sky
like a patron drunk from life

there are coffee smells lingering
like jackets on the mist's sleeves
and I wipe my nose on them
like it was pretending to be winter

more for the smell to seduce me
more than your perfume did back then
when you said you were not wearing any
and it was just you wanting me

to never remember the scent of woman
and the sounds you made driving reckless
back from someone's rincon afternoon
that we stole for a few hours

and never returned for a refund from
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Sunshine
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1 posted 2008-09-23 09:05 AM



That beautifully elusive scent...
one that can be found only
when standing close to love.



Beautiful...as I've come to expect,
and never regret.


Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2008-09-23 10:21 AM


Ms sun thank you babe.
The Lady
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3 posted 2008-09-23 12:11 PM



the smell of coffee and your gurkha
you always hit just the right note
stanger darlin'

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2008-09-23 12:19 PM


Ladyone. A pleasure to linger in you shadow places. Thanks ms
Indigo
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5 posted 2008-09-23 02:04 PM


salt marsh and tar pits,
olfactory pages from
a rincon dream book.

Indigo

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2008-09-23 03:33 PM


Ms indi. And your footprints are still there sometimes. Between the waving pages.
Margherita
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7 posted 2008-09-23 05:31 PM


quote:
back from someone's rincon afternoon
that we stole for a few hours

and never returned for a refund from



Such unique thought patterns. I love your memories, dear D.!

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2008-09-23 05:36 PM


ms mar, thank you sweet lady
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9 posted 2008-10-06 03:19 PM


quote:
more for the smell to seduce me
more than your perfume did back then
when you said you were not wearing any
and it was just you wanting me



I love this more than I can express right now.  I just fell in love with that part.

A

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