Open Poetry #43 |
perchance to dream |
poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
Perchance to dream - (To Karl Klein and Hamlet) “Is it earth, any perchance?” “Have a sit.” As if I have been welcoming extraterrestrials all along. “Is it this barren?” “No, it is just my shape of earth.” With a start I wake up. Dawn, noon, mid noon, afternoon and twilight are dancing around me. I step down to a verdant planet. Only a bit of barren land does have a splinter of a laugh. Somewhere inside. © 2008 - All Rights Reserved Kushal Poddar clever talks delay friendship! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very interesting dream, dear Ku! Be careful, next time they might carry you with them for a real sight seeing tour among the stars! I love the idea of discovering a splinter of laugh somewhere inside. Barren could refer to some frightening future, so better act before it is too late. Very good job, dear Poet! Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Interesting, Kushal. I am intrigued by the last 3 lines . . . - Owl |
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