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the lacework of surrender
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the lacework of surrender |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
desires simmer like sullen whispers on a sweat-soaked neck affections boiling over in steam-laden pots of the soul clouds of confusion meander through the mind distracting the senses with auras of attraction murmuring in motion, stuttering in silence the heart rambles through the brambles of commitment, contentment, contemplation earning itself the mantra of make-believe fantasy exercising fortuitously leaving the mind to the lacework of surrender |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
the heart rambles through the brambles of commitment, contentment, contemplation ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Such a wonderful weave of words. Love this, steavenr~ |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
What a great explaination of Lust. (Can we say that?) Beautiful poem. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
'weave of words' oooohh, I like that. Thanks, Blues Thanks, WT, and to answer your question...yes, we can. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Awesome! I couldn't pick a favorite line...especially liked each one and all.  So glad to read you again. Welcome home. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A most captivating write, an intense crescendo of feelings! Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
"The lacework of surrender." Excellent. Bob |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
TD, thank you...always a high compliment when you comment...thank you for taking your time to read it Margherita, appreciate your very kind remarks, nice of you to read and comment...your graciousness means a lot Bob, thanks...interestingly it (the write, i.e.) almost went a different direction, but afterwards it was the genesis for that title...appreciate your comments |
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AAB Member
since 2008-04-10
Posts 99Canada |
wonderfull, as your work usually is. the title is just as brilliant as the rest of the poem. "Death cannot stop true love, all it can do is delay it for a while" The Princess Bride |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fabulous...James |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
AAB, thank you for your humbling comments...appreciated you reading and taking the time to be so generous James, truly and remarkably appreciative for your kind thoughts...thank you |
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