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Open Poetry #43

9-18-08

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

0 posted 2008-09-19 12:32 PM

9-18-08

Orange sherbet dawn:
smooth sweetness melts into day
with a taste of ice.

September hints October,
but August owns afternoon.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2008-09-19 03:55 PM

Delicious and wonderfully tempting.

Nice, and low fat too!!

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

2 posted 2008-09-19 05:54 PM

Yo Nan,

This works very well. It is very descriptive of this time of year here.

Bobby

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2008-09-19 06:55 PM

Well done, poet! I like how you tied the seasons together...tastefully!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2008-09-20 04:43 AM

Delightful!

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

5 posted 2008-09-20 01:38 PM

Lovely, Nancy.
Ida

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

6 posted 2008-09-22 02:29 PM

"August owns afternoon"

beauty!

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

7 posted 2008-09-22 03:43 PM

Oh guys, thanks so much for replying to this little one. I know it isn't much, so I really appreciate you taking time to let me know you read it.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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