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RMW
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0 posted 2008-09-18 05:46 PM


To Write A Love Letter

A writing desk, perhaps antique.
At any rate, of size sufficient to accommodate
stamps, envelopes, stationary,
not to forget
a fountain pen instrumentally graceful,
all this arranged with subtle art.
And, of course, the chair itself
thoughtfully placed near a window
through which, depending on the time of month,
help, in the form of moonlight, full or crescent,
may be entreated.
Tea? Yes. Green or black will make no difference,
though I prefer that from the Orient,
steeped within the trade of ships
like "Flying Cloud" and "Sea Witch".
But I digress. Just remember,
romance takes work.

RMW

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nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2008-09-18 05:47 PM


~~sweet~~ and so true

M

RMW
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2 posted 2008-09-18 05:48 PM


Ahhh. Such a nice welcome back. Thank you, M.
HopeS
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3 posted 2008-09-19 02:29 PM


Romance takes work , this was a beautiful work of art


Hope

1slick_lady
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4 posted 2008-09-19 02:59 PM


very nice
and i am so happy to have your beautiful poetry back


Pilgrimage
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5 posted 2008-09-19 03:10 PM


Yes.  Atmosphere is everything.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Sunshine
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6 posted 2008-09-19 03:28 PM


It's so wonderful to see this lovely penning, Robert. How graceful, how intimate the notion of such a setting. You've been away this summer...it's our fall pleasure to welcome you home again!

And how well you caught a certain "something close" to this writer.



" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

secondhanddreampoet
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7 posted 2008-09-19 06:51 PM


VERY well written!

[a special treat for us tea lovers and
  unabashedly 'incurable' Romantics!]

long-sustained applause!!

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Gaia
8 posted 2008-09-19 06:54 PM


What a wonderful read. I like the way you set the scene in preparation for the anticipated love letter.
It's great to see your name here again.

RMW
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9 posted 2008-09-20 10:02 AM


All ..... thank you for your kind words, and the encouragement, and....the welcome. Smiling. Bob
Margherita
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10 posted 2008-09-20 10:47 AM


Oh, this is very lovely! It even makes me want to take off my antique desk all the piles of papers that wait to be ordered. Then I also want a tea and why not ... I might want to write in this special atmosphere the little poem I have in mind.

Very inspiring!!

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Martie
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11 posted 2008-09-20 05:41 PM


Write a letter of feelings now
with the light in the corner
cushioned and mellow
turning the room to comfortable,
but don’t forget to keep the curtain open
for the moon and me.

It's good to see you!

Balladeer
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12 posted 2008-09-20 08:45 PM


Your words set a perfect tone for the subject. The best word I can use is..exquisite.
OwlSA
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13 posted 2008-09-21 03:36 AM


Oh, I loved this beautiful scene and the delightful digression!  Romance is a perfect blending of art and sincerity!  We are now expecting to read the love letter that matches the high standard of the setting!  

I also love the picture Karilea posted and can understand exactly why she did.

It has inspired me to post a very old poem, on not quite the same subject.

- Owl

[This message has been edited by OwlSA (09-21-2008 04:59 AM).]

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