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XOx Uriah xOX
Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403
Virginia

0 posted 2008-09-18 04:08 PM



Did the package arrive?

"Crisis of the Month Club"

Of course.

Stamped
by Mind

Destination
and return
address,
the same

received
by sender

Of course it did.

For, you are
the deliverer

With a birthday candle
you illuminate the sun

banish darkness

Now, blow it out
and make a wish

Did the package arrive?

Enjoy the present

***

© Copyright 2008 Larry F. Leake - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2008-09-18 06:25 PM


Right now I just want my muffin...



starved, I yam.

I'll enjoy the present then? ?

Pilgrimage
Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
Texas, USA
2 posted 2008-09-19 12:31 PM


I like the play on words, the cool acceptance, and especially the ending.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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