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| Open Poetry #43 |
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Bella and Edward |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
Sitting here anticipating And with myself alone debating. Wanting you to love me Yet dreading the distant dream. Knowing you can’t truly be Everything you seem. Your every move sends shivers, down my spine And your velvet voice veers me, out of my mind. A perfect model of the perfect man You exist but there’s no way you can. Dazed and lost in your addicting haze I give up and surrender to your glorious gaze. My heart may pay for the things we say But that won’t happen as long as you stay. By your side I feel as though I am beautiful as well I have no clue how but I’m under your spell. Quiet and sweet, is your gentle heart beat Steady are your words, as you whisk me off my feet. My soul I’d gladly give If the reward is to always live Wrapped in the chilling comfort of your arms Away from the threat of all human harm. |
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Dark Icy New Member
since 2008-09-17
Posts 4No Man's Land |
That is beautiful... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
NIce flow of words...James |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
first, welcome...nice to have you...now, your write is somewhat Poe-etic in places...nice flow of phrasing and words...gently strong in content...very nicely done...looking to see much more to come...thank you |
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