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Open Poetry #43

Bones Can't Stand Punks

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

0 posted 2008-09-16 08:54 PM

Bones can’t stand
for brazen punks
that strut around
acting tough.

They don’t scare him
in the least.
No not one little bit.

Punk comes around
to bother Bones.

Bones asks him why
he’s walking that way.

Punk says--why I do it
to scare
little creeps like you.

Bones lays him out
with a sucker punch.

The Punk
never saw it coming.

Bobby

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

1 posted 2008-09-17 10:25 AM

Haha! That made my day a little brighter.

Last week I had a similar encounter with two punks near a local college. I was walking along and I looked at them, like humans look at other humans.

similar thereafter.

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

2 posted 2008-09-17 10:30 AM

I'm sorry, but I can't stop laughing at the sucker punch line. You should publish this so people can laugh at it...

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

3 posted 2008-09-17 12:13 PM

Thanks Viking_metal,

Here in the hood the "sucker punch" sometimes comes in handy.

I'm pleased you enjoyed the poem.

Bobby

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

4 posted 2008-09-17 05:12 PM

If you lived here in minnesota, I'd request to go out to coffee with you.

Still laughing at the sucker punch line if I say it out loud...

"Bones lays him out
with a sucker punch."

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

5 posted 2008-09-17 05:42 PM

Thanks again Viking_metal,

I'm pleased you got a kick out of it.

Bobby

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